Chapter: Schooner of the Moon
A Familiar Word – October 26, 2020
This page turned out rather busy, but… I like it.
It still feels balanced.
Also… HMMM.
…
Who am I kidding, half of my comments on these pages will be “HMMM.”
A Familiar Word – October 26, 2020
This page turned out rather busy, but… I like it.
It still feels balanced.
Also… HMMM.
…
Who am I kidding, half of my comments on these pages will be “HMMM.”
I’ve always liked how you emphasize words.
And why am I just noticing that the backpack is red? Such a weird color in this very blue scene!
Obligatory HMMMM comment!
(in seriousness despite a lot going on the page flows really well! I like it!*chefs kiss*)
HIS MOMMY, IRVING, HAVE SOME HEART
Katja looks so concerned 🙁